No title, but could use some advice

No title, but could use some advice

Jamie

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03-08-2013, 06:50 AM

Hi Brett
I liked this, it put some stong images in my empty head. very strong for your first poem, well done. I'm sorry I cant offer you any technical advice as i'm probably in the same boat as you.

Take my comments with a pinch of salt
I have no knowledge about a lot.

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No title, but could use some advice - by Brett David - 03-08-2013, 03:40 AM

RE: No title, but could use some advice - by Leanne - 03-08-2013, 05:18 AM

RE: No title, but could use some advice - by Brett David - 03-08-2013, 05:56 AM

RE: No title, but could use some advice - by Leanne - 03-08-2013, 06:02 AM

RE: No title, but could use some advice - by Brett David - 03-08-2013, 06:37 AM

RE: No title, but could use some advice - by Leanne - 03-08-2013, 06:47 AM

RE: No title, but could use some advice - by Jamie - 03-08-2013, 06:50 AM

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