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[Heartafire]

Hello Serge, Todd, Cidermaid, and tektac, thank you so much for the input, it is so very appreciated. Todd, your reference to Romans 7 most insightful. The underlying layer here is the debased pastor in whose hands this young girl has fallen victim, the gaurdian wolf. Your suggestion to end on the lines referenced is excellent. Cidermaid, thank you for the encouragement and fine gift of insight, so very helpful here. Tectak, your suggestion is excellent as well, I would love further comment from you on this. Thank you all, I plan to revise this based on your input.
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