Knockout
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Hi Rodthegod, I see there are no self-esteem issues here, lol.
This is a good read, the moralizing woven with a light touch. I interpreted a contradiction here:
The substance that we live in,
can leave situations sticky,
In the end I want the truth,
but right now I'm not too picky,

Some sort of validity will do fine,
for the present moment,
My verisimilitude is killing the game,
here's my condolence,

It is a nice touch, a stepping back. Very nicely done, I enjoyed it.
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Knockout - by Rodthegod - 03-19-2013, 08:12 AM
RE: Knockout - by softlyfalling - 03-19-2013, 09:13 AM
RE: Knockout - by Rodthegod - 03-19-2013, 09:19 AM
RE: Knockout - by Heartafire - 03-23-2013, 01:00 AM



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