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But A Fantasy, Still

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03-31-2013, 08:28 AM

Hi UnicornRainbowCake,
I can't describe how happy it makes me feel to hear your kind words. Thank you so much Smile

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This poem means a lot to me, so for others to be able to enjoy it too, just makes me so happy Smile

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My fav. is also L3, no doubt Smile

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And about the 'spewing sorrow': I felt like it needed a first line, that somehow contrasted the other lines a bit Smile

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Best,
- Volaticus

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But A Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-27-2013, 11:15 AM

RE: First time sharing a poem, so any comment would be greatly appreciated. - by neena2504 - 03-28-2013, 12:40 AM

RE: First time sharing a poem, so any comment would be greatly appreciated. - by Volaticus - 03-28-2013, 02:45 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by UnicornRainbowCake - 03-31-2013, 08:12 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 08:28 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 10:08 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by milo - 03-31-2013, 10:12 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 10:25 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by milo - 03-31-2013, 10:28 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 10:54 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 10:38 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 10:59 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 12:39 PM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 12:45 PM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 12:55 PM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 12:42 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 12:51 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 01:01 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 01:05 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 11:36 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 04-01-2013, 07:56 AM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 01:00 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 01:04 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 04-03-2013, 01:57 PM

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