But A Fantasy, Still

But A Fantasy, Still

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03-31-2013, 10:28 AM

(03-31-2013, 10:25 AM)Volaticus Wrote: Ahh. Thanks. I didn't realize that. But I honestly don't know where the grammar is incorrect.
I always like to improve work that needs it, but in this case, I just don't know how. :S

Ask yourself what or whom is spewing the sorrow in the first line.

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But A Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-27-2013, 11:15 AM

RE: First time sharing a poem, so any comment would be greatly appreciated. - by neena2504 - 03-28-2013, 12:40 AM

RE: First time sharing a poem, so any comment would be greatly appreciated. - by Volaticus - 03-28-2013, 02:45 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by UnicornRainbowCake - 03-31-2013, 08:12 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 08:28 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 10:08 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by milo - 03-31-2013, 10:12 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 10:25 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by milo - 03-31-2013, 10:28 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 10:54 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 10:38 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 10:59 AM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 12:39 PM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 12:45 PM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 12:55 PM

RE: But a Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 12:42 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 12:51 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 01:01 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 01:05 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 11:36 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 04-01-2013, 07:56 AM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 01:00 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 01:04 PM

RE: But A Fantasy, Still - by trueenigma - 04-03-2013, 01:57 PM

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