I Lay

I Lay

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04-10-2013, 06:42 PM

(04-10-2013, 05:58 PM)Zero Wrote: Eh, I'm just going to go with my piece, the reason for that is because I wouldn't want much of the poem cut/shortened because of sentimental value, as this was written by me when I was 13, thanks a lot for the feedback and the help though!

yah, sorry, forgot this was novice, disregard my previous comment, good luck on the grammar.

milo

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I Lay - by Zero - 04-09-2013, 04:38 PM

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