04-14-2013, 01:33 AM
I'm fairly new to poetry, so take my viewpoint with a grain of salt.
I enjoyed the poem, but I'm a bit tired of this broad and overused topic. I didn't quite get the feeling that you were totally invested in your topic either, but that might just be the vibe I got. It's a good poem, at least from my perspective. Just seems like a bit more depth would add.
I enjoyed the poem, but I'm a bit tired of this broad and overused topic. I didn't quite get the feeling that you were totally invested in your topic either, but that might just be the vibe I got. It's a good poem, at least from my perspective. Just seems like a bit more depth would add.