Chiromancy

[Crepuscule]

Yikes. Thesaurus much?

No, I don't use one.

If you're bringing this to a critical audience, that implies you might want to do something with it. I'd suggest toning down the language a little bit so that your audience can appreciate it. I've bolded words most people would probably have to look up.

I didn't have any intentions for this piece other than to figure out whether it had any merit.

Thanks for the comments.