04-15-2013, 08:17 PM
Hi Ganman,
Don't worry... I'm not being a drama llama.
This was the second "poem" I wrote and, if I'm frank with myself, it's pretentious and needs to be killed.
I like free verse, most of the poetry I read is non-metrical and non-rhyming, but I think I need to concentrate on developing the basic skills before I start chopping up prose into lines and calling it a poem.
Don't worry... I'm not being a drama llama.
This was the second "poem" I wrote and, if I'm frank with myself, it's pretentious and needs to be killed.
I like free verse, most of the poetry I read is non-metrical and non-rhyming, but I think I need to concentrate on developing the basic skills before I start chopping up prose into lines and calling it a poem.
this is just awful. It is blushingly faux-poetic - Milo