Solitude
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Seems long-winded, with sudden stops and twists with commas around one word; and things like inveigh her now, and intrude her solitude, sounding a little rigid and silly, unless you talk that way.

Despite those things: it's not a horrible poem.
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Solitude - by Pilgrim - 04-29-2013, 11:19 AM
RE: Solitude - by rowens - 04-29-2013, 10:32 PM
RE: Solitude - by Pilgrim - 04-30-2013, 08:47 AM
RE: Solitude - by Magpie - 04-30-2013, 02:33 AM
RE: Solitude - by Brownlie - 05-04-2013, 01:34 PM



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