Solitude

[Pilgrim]

Seems long-winded, with sudden stops and twists with commas around one word; and things like inveigh her now, and intrude her solitude, sounding a little rigid and silly, unless you talk that way.

Despite those things: it's not a horrible poem.

Hello, rowens. Thank you for your comments.

Regards,

Pilgrim.

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There are some very good parts to this poem, "resurgent remnants of her past" is worthy of note. I had not heard of the word "inveigh" before and had to look it up, and although I thank you for, now I have learnt another new word, I would also say that it would throw a lot of people and some might even think it was a spelling mistake, perhaps.
I found the last stanza difficult to read, it almost seems tied up in knots and needs unravelling, and the last phrase "not intrude her solitude" doesn't work and actually takes the shine slightly away from the obvious talent that you have displayed throughout the rest of the poem.

Hello, ambrosial revelation. Thank you for your comments.

Regards,

Pilgrim.