05-07-2013, 12:36 AM 
	
	
	
		Hi Heslopian,
Thanks for the kind comments, I've wrote more on the other post about how grateful I am as regards 'saving' these poems.
Thanks for the advice regarding this poem, especially the use and overuse of alliteration, it is very helpful.
Thanks
AR
	
	
Thanks for the kind comments, I've wrote more on the other post about how grateful I am as regards 'saving' these poems.
Thanks for the advice regarding this poem, especially the use and overuse of alliteration, it is very helpful.
Thanks
AR
 wae aye man ye radgie
 wae aye man ye radgie
 

 
