05-07-2013, 08:53 AM 
	
	
	
		Hi AR,
This poem really surprised me (in a good way), when I read the second stanza. It took a turn that, in it's meaning, I found beautiful. I don't think I can add much more, that has not already been said.
I find the sentiment in your poems to be very real, and therefore also very appealing. Another great poem
My best,
	
	
	
This poem really surprised me (in a good way), when I read the second stanza. It took a turn that, in it's meaning, I found beautiful. I don't think I can add much more, that has not already been said.
I find the sentiment in your poems to be very real, and therefore also very appealing. Another great poem

My best,

 

 
