King of Abuse

[Zerric]

Er...i'm sorry...but all i could think about while reading this was Vampire bats. I mean its very suggestive of dealing with bats. Hanging, mountain view, thrown out in jumbled lots, a guardian flies in (there's a movie about owls), fly back to the nest, etc. etc. anyway...my deeper analysis:

King of Abuse
Oh I feel like the prince of abuse.
Can’t breathe, I’m hanging, but with no noose.
I’m held by my father of all lies. father of all lies? like your biggest lie or an actual reference to your father, the king of abuse? It feels a bit weird to me.
The dreaded “love” is just one fake cry.
I now fear the moment we depart.
Every second I know it will start.
For I see it in the mountain view.
Even furthest oracles come true. Oracles aren't really visions of the future. They're the people who tell the future.

Caressing me with “love,” so I thought, Isn't it already known that this love is fake, and is dreaded? Why would you think he would caress you with love then?
He throws me out. I was with jumbled lots.
As I fend from night and it’s gashes.
I dream of dancing on his ashes.
I can see a guardian sweep in.
But you can’t even trust your dear twin. -.- I'm a twin. I don't like this line.
And so I fly back to the nest.
It appears I’ve failed even this test.

Truly this night is of my own hell.
Did I fall myself? or did he too help.
Now mother’s wings turn me back around.
Back to these corpses of past I have found. Cuz the past is dead to you??
No harmony left. snakes in the pit. I think you mean that it looks unharmonious, right? True, snakes get along well, but it just looks messy.
The king of abuse throws me in shit.
And when I feel like it is the end,
the king starts the cycle again.

Its a good poem, but its hard to find a good flow while reading. Helps if you use punctuation to indicate where you want pauses in the flow. Also it doesn't seem like your the prince of abuse...more like the prince of being abused...just saying.