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An April Stroll (second edit)

An April Stroll (second edit)
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#20
05-09-2013, 08:55 AM
Hi Volaticus,
I like this haiku, it manages to say quite a lot in those three lines.
Painting the scene, then with the second image a kind of hardship being portrayed, then counterbalanced with the human interaction in the form of kindness.
I was just wondering if you had any more haiku I'm trying to get more people writing in this forum. Or else there's just me all the time.
Thanks
AR
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Messages In This Thread
An April Stroll (second edit) - by Volaticus - 04-11-2013, 09:15 AM
RE: An April Stroll - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-12-2013, 08:51 AM
RE: An April Stroll - by Volaticus - 04-13-2013, 12:24 AM
RE: An April Stroll - by milo - 04-12-2013, 08:52 AM
RE: An April Stroll - by billy - 04-12-2013, 02:04 PM
RE: An April Stroll - by NakedBear - 04-12-2013, 02:07 PM
RE: An April Stroll - by billy - 04-12-2013, 02:13 PM
RE: An April Stroll (edited) - by Volaticus - 04-13-2013, 07:01 AM
RE: An April Stroll (edited) - by Volaticus - 04-13-2013, 07:44 AM
RE: An April Stroll (edited) - by justcloudy - 04-13-2013, 09:04 AM
RE: An April Stroll (edited) - by Volaticus - 04-13-2013, 09:15 AM
RE: An April Stroll (edited) - by billy - 04-13-2013, 09:07 AM
RE: An April Stroll (edited) - by billy - 04-21-2013, 04:25 PM
RE: An April Stroll (second edit) - by billy - 04-22-2013, 07:38 AM
RE: An April Stroll (second edit) - by Volaticus - 04-23-2013, 12:29 AM
RE: An April Stroll (second edit) - by vtsai01 - 04-29-2013, 08:27 AM
RE: An April Stroll (second edit) - by Volaticus - 04-29-2013, 08:28 AM
RE: An April Stroll (second edit) - by Magpie - 05-09-2013, 08:55 AM
RE: An April Stroll (second edit) - by Volaticus - 05-09-2013, 10:43 AM



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