Feral Cat

Feral Cat

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Metavariable loon, sir.

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05-10-2013, 09:40 AM

Yeah I would say that Heart is right about the last line, now that I have read it a few times, I think the word ajar threw me because it is not used a lot and it also reminds of a joke people used to tell in school when I was about 7 years old "when is a door not a door? when it's ajar" Hysterical

You should definitely write more haiku or senyru because you have obviously got a knack for it and that's just after writing four.
Thanks again.
AR

wae aye man ye radgie

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Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 01:51 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Magpie - 05-10-2013, 02:05 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 02:22 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Heartafire - 05-10-2013, 09:09 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 09:22 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Magpie - 05-10-2013, 09:40 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 10:03 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by FayandFire - 06-02-2013, 10:57 PM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-03-2013, 12:36 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-03-2013, 05:21 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-03-2013, 08:09 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-04-2013, 01:36 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-04-2013, 10:45 PM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 02:49 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 07:41 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 08:50 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 09:27 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 09:43 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 09:54 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 11:22 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 09:38 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 09:46 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 09:53 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:03 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Brownlie - 06-05-2013, 10:06 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 10:18 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 10:12 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:09 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:18 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:22 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 10:30 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:34 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 11:33 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 11:56 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 11:59 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 09:10 PM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-06-2013, 12:10 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by billy - 06-06-2013, 07:34 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-06-2013, 07:38 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-07-2013, 02:23 PM

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