Feral Cat

[Volaticus]

Yeah I would say that Heart is right about the last line, now that I have read it a few times, I think the word ajar threw me because it is not used a lot and it also reminds of a joke people used to tell in school when I was about 7 years old "when is a door not a door? when it's ajar"
You should definitely write more haiku or senyru because you have obviously got a knack for it and that's just after writing four.
Thanks again.
AR

I've also changed my mind about the last line. I think I'll keep it.
Haha, we also have those jokes in Danish. I loved them when I was a child.
And thank you for your kind encouragement. As a person who struggles a lot with my writing, it means a lot to me to hear than I'm not that bad after all. Thanks.
LB