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05-12-2013, 11:49 AM
(04-27-2013, 11:41 PM)Volaticus Wrote: I like what you've written. But I'm left with an unsatisfied feeling, because I don't know why you write those things. What's the reason for those things to happen to 'your' body? I like the poem, but I think it needs a little more.Thanks volaticus! I agree, it definitely needs more. Thanks for the input |
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Untitled - by allykat727 - 04-27-2013, 10:04 AM
RE: Untitled - by Wratchet - 04-27-2013, 10:35 AM
RE: Untitled - by Volaticus - 04-27-2013, 11:41 PM
RE: Untitled - by allykat727 - 05-12-2013, 11:49 AM
RE: Untitled - by qwerty_H - 05-13-2013, 06:04 AM
RE: Untitled - by allykat727 - 05-13-2013, 07:02 AM
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