Forgive Me
#7
Hey everyone,
thnx for your replies. I understand that the form is highly restrictive...and honestly i don't know why i chose to do rhyming couplets. And, i acknowledge that some of my rhymes were forced. Thank you for your critique, i'll keep it in mind as i write further.

Quote:no need for the dots, if you do use them i think they come in three's
Sorry, my bad... I'm so used to typing the dots, i tend to go overboard. I'm trying to change Tongue
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Messages In This Thread
Forgive Me - by Zerric - 05-08-2013, 01:10 PM
RE: Forgive Me - by Zerric - 05-09-2013, 12:14 PM
RE: Forgive Me - by justcloudy - 05-09-2013, 09:57 PM
RE: Forgive Me - by James - 05-10-2013, 09:02 AM
RE: Forgive Me - by Sonata - 05-11-2013, 06:04 AM
RE: Forgive Me - by billy - 05-13-2013, 04:39 PM
RE: Forgive Me - by Zerric - 05-13-2013, 05:21 PM



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