05-13-2013, 05:21 PM
Hey everyone,
thnx for your replies. I understand that the form is highly restrictive...and honestly i don't know why i chose to do rhyming couplets. And, i acknowledge that some of my rhymes were forced. Thank you for your critique, i'll keep it in mind as i write further.
thnx for your replies. I understand that the form is highly restrictive...and honestly i don't know why i chose to do rhyming couplets. And, i acknowledge that some of my rhymes were forced. Thank you for your critique, i'll keep it in mind as i write further.
Quote:no need for the dots, if you do use them i think they come in three'sSorry, my bad... I'm so used to typing the dots, i tend to go overboard. I'm trying to change

