05-17-2013, 08:35 AM 
	
	
	(05-08-2013, 08:41 AM)TimeOnMyHands Wrote: Edit 1The first stanza really got to me. gives a good sense of an enlisted person's inability to control their own life in that aspect, and that they feel much like pawns in this moment. I've never seen this analogy before- military soldiers much like a stapler/staple gun, but definitely gets the point across!
Soldiers inside the staple gun,
deployed by unseen hands,
always one more, ready to go.
In-line strapped to the rail,
fold their arms as they leave the plane, I think the word "leave" is too simple for what they are doing, maybe depart or abandon
dropping through white clouds.
Uniformed beach landings,
guns held high, knives at their side,
plunging into breaking seas. I love this image, very powerful
Onward they march, relentless, "relentless" is good word for it in my experience!
integral to the war machine,
and the beat of its linear heart. linear...interesting. to be interpreted as never changing or growing?
“We, the unwilling, led by the unknowing, are doing the impossible for the ungrateful. We have done so much, for so long, with so little, we are now qualified to do anything with nothing.
― Konstantin Josef Jireček
	
― Konstantin Josef Jireček

 

 
