05-25-2013, 05:41 PM
little typo in "diamonds".
I like it, but it is a senryuu. (same number of syllables, traditionally, but
"Senryū tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryū are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious." (quoted from wikiedia)
I like it, but it is a senryuu. (same number of syllables, traditionally, but
"Senryū tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryū are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious." (quoted from wikiedia)