Senryu of a narcissistic male

Senryu of a narcissistic male

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05-25-2013, 06:30 PM

(05-24-2013, 02:57 AM)Ryan_w_r Wrote: Haiku of a narcissistic male

You are beneath me
I eat coal, shit out dimonds diamonds
I am immortal

Hahaha is that even a true haiku ?

i'll second serge's two comments as to it being more senryu than haiku. a haiku would use a seasonal word besides the points mentioned.
good effort

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Senryu of a narcissistic male - by Ryan_w_r - 05-24-2013, 02:57 AM

RE: Haiku of a narcissistic male - by Magpie - 05-25-2013, 11:34 AM

RE: Haiku of a narcissistic male - by Ryan_w_r - 05-25-2013, 11:49 AM

RE: Haiku of a narcissistic male - by Magpie - 05-25-2013, 03:12 PM

RE: Haiku of a narcissistic male - by serge gurkski - 05-25-2013, 05:41 PM

RE: Senryu of a narcissistic male - by Ryan_w_r - 05-26-2013, 02:18 PM

RE: Haiku of a narcissistic male - by billy - 05-25-2013, 06:30 PM

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