05-30-2013, 05:01 PM
(05-23-2013, 04:51 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:A noisy Pigeon
furiously flaps flustered
through the calm evening
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Mister mischievious is it mischievous?
Robin red supervises
my gardening skills
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Crow versus Seagull
squally squabble screech and squawk
scattering tourists
hi amb
not sure the alliteration works that well in the 1st and 3rd poem
the 2nd doesn't read too badly and has a good change of direction with the last line.