Feral Cat

Feral Cat

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06-02-2013, 10:57 PM

(05-10-2013, 01:51 AM)Volaticus Wrote:
Matted, muddy tufts
Eyes piercing glass
I set my door ajar

This is only my fourth haiku. I'd love to know what you think, good or bad.

I enjoyed reading this. I may be impartial because I have three cats so it hit home. I also really like the last line and I am glad you decided not to change it.

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Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 01:51 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Magpie - 05-10-2013, 02:05 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 02:22 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Heartafire - 05-10-2013, 09:09 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 09:22 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Magpie - 05-10-2013, 09:40 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 10:03 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by FayandFire - 06-02-2013, 10:57 PM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-03-2013, 12:36 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-03-2013, 05:21 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-03-2013, 08:09 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-04-2013, 01:36 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-04-2013, 10:45 PM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 02:49 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 07:41 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 08:50 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 09:27 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 09:43 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 09:54 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 11:22 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 09:38 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 09:46 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 09:53 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:03 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Brownlie - 06-05-2013, 10:06 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 10:18 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 10:12 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:09 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:18 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:22 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 10:30 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:34 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 11:33 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 11:56 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 11:59 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 09:10 PM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-06-2013, 12:10 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by billy - 06-06-2013, 07:34 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-06-2013, 07:38 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-07-2013, 02:23 PM

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