06-03-2013, 08:09 AM
(06-03-2013, 05:21 AM)serge gurkski Wrote: Hi Louise,Hi Serge,
I am very cautious comes it to poetic forms foreign to Danes and Germans just the same.
I like the topic of this haiku (?)
I read it simply as a poem.
And it works for me.
:-)
I'm not sure if this is a haiku or senryu, or just a short poem.
I think I see it mostly as a short poem, since I'm not familiar with all the rules and techniques of haiku.
Thanks for reading and for your kind words, I'm glad it worked for you.
- Louise

