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My First Tonka
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06-04-2013, 12:49 PM
(06-04-2013, 12:26 PM)billy Wrote: great as a short, great as a parody and pretty good as a tanka. i take it back it a really good tanka (i think )I may have tried to be too clever with the "a lone = alone" as well as the "boys are bulldozers girls are front end loaders". Also, the pun probably ruins it as much as it saves it. still, thanks for the comments, billy |
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My First Tonka - by milo - 06-04-2013, 06:33 AM
RE: My First Tonka - by Magpie - 06-04-2013, 11:35 AM
RE: My First Tonka - by billy - 06-04-2013, 12:26 PM
RE: My First Tonka - by milo - 06-04-2013, 12:49 PM
RE: My First Tonka - by billy - 06-04-2013, 03:12 PM
RE: My First Tonka - by milo - 06-04-2013, 03:26 PM
RE: My First Tonka - by milo - 06-12-2013, 07:20 AM
RE: My First Tonka - by billy - 06-12-2013, 10:19 AM
RE: My First Tonka - by Leanne - 06-23-2013, 12:23 PM
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