06-08-2013, 04:43 AM 
	
	
	
		I absolutely love this poem.
Stanza 2 & 4 get my vote for some of outstanding lines. I particularly like... no actually I like all of it!
I've lost count of how many times i have revisted this one and each time i have wanted to offer some crit, but I think that actually I'm just going to give up on that idea because i like it so much.
All the best AJ.
	
	
	
Stanza 2 & 4 get my vote for some of outstanding lines. I particularly like... no actually I like all of it!
I've lost count of how many times i have revisted this one and each time i have wanted to offer some crit, but I think that actually I'm just going to give up on that idea because i like it so much.
All the best AJ.

 

 
