Dance so good
#4
I absolutely love this poem.
Stanza 2 & 4 get my vote for some of outstanding lines. I particularly like... no actually I like all of it!
I've lost count of how many times i have revisted this one and each time i have wanted to offer some crit, but I think that actually I'm just going to give up on that idea because i like it so much.
All the best AJ.
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Dance so good - by serge gurkski - 05-31-2013, 06:14 PM
RE: Dance so good - by serge gurkski - 06-07-2013, 10:16 PM
RE: Dance so good - by cidermaid - 06-08-2013, 04:43 AM
RE: Dance so good - by serge gurkski - 06-08-2013, 05:40 AM



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