06-08-2013, 03:15 PM
Witches, what can you take out of them?
The pastor spoke, with words
not thought just invoked.
Children listening with intent,
hatred a feeling, I never forget.
We started off our young love
at bible camp.
Why the junking slits
was I singing? When
I could have just sung to you?
Amanda, we were so young and innocent.
A system only using pipes to vent:
you have sent me on this
epic quest. To be pure.
Born again, renewed.
I like this above it ties together fairly well
We started off our relationship,
with your two moms. Not
to mention a sinking woodpecker.
You wanted more. A husband,
money a protector.
seems like there should be a comma between money and a protector
God I should have just slept with her.
We sat at hastings, I felt so nervous.
After all of those years wanting to
see you again. I helped your hand
and grabbed it before your tears began.
Then I was not ready, girl. Your God and
G-Sus is crazy. So are you currently
Amanda. Why did you have to marry
the next boy after me. Than, never talk
to me again?
It seems like a poem of a lost love, and ties together throughout the piece. The only thing I didnt get was the "God I should have just slept with her" seems like your saying if you just slept with her everything wouldve turned out right. It seems like a good line it just seems out of place to me where its at.
The pastor spoke, with words
not thought just invoked.
Children listening with intent,
hatred a feeling, I never forget.
We started off our young love
at bible camp.
Why the junking slits
was I singing? When
I could have just sung to you?
Amanda, we were so young and innocent.
A system only using pipes to vent:
you have sent me on this
epic quest. To be pure.
Born again, renewed.
I like this above it ties together fairly well
We started off our relationship,
with your two moms. Not
to mention a sinking woodpecker.
You wanted more. A husband,
money a protector.
seems like there should be a comma between money and a protector
God I should have just slept with her.
We sat at hastings, I felt so nervous.
After all of those years wanting to
see you again. I helped your hand
and grabbed it before your tears began.
Then I was not ready, girl. Your God and
G-Sus is crazy. So are you currently
Amanda. Why did you have to marry
the next boy after me. Than, never talk
to me again?
It seems like a poem of a lost love, and ties together throughout the piece. The only thing I didnt get was the "God I should have just slept with her" seems like your saying if you just slept with her everything wouldve turned out right. It seems like a good line it just seems out of place to me where its at.