Which is Witches
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(06-09-2013, 12:47 AM)Bunx Wrote:  
(06-04-2013, 02:02 AM)Bunx Wrote:  Witches, what can you take out of them?
The pastor spoke, with words
not thought just invoked.
Children listening with intent,
hatred a feeling, I never forget.

We started off our young love
at bible camp.
Why the junking slits
was I singing? When
I could have just sung to you?

Amanda, we were so young and innocent.
A system only using pipes to vent:
you have sent me on this
epic quest. To be pure.
Born again, renewed.

We started off our relationship,
with your two moms. Not
to mention a sinking woodpecker.
You wanted more. A husband,
money, a protector. God I
should have just slept with her.
As if it would the spur.

We sat at hastings, I felt so nervous.
After all of those years wanting to
see you again. I helped your hand
and grabbed it before your tears began.

Then I was not ready, girl. Your God and
G-Sus is crazy. So are you currently
Amanda. Why did you have to marry
the next boy after me. Than, never talk
to me again?

I miss you.

added a line and a comma. thanks for the positive feedback!
I like it, gives more to the piece imo.
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Messages In This Thread
Which is Witches - by Bunx - 06-04-2013, 02:02 AM
RE: Females are witches, and whiches; get stitches - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-09-2013, 01:45 PM



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