06-09-2013, 09:44 PM
Hi TOMH,
I really enjoyed the imagery in this, the first stanza reminds me of all the times that I sat round camp fires and the smoke seems to follow you no matter where you sit, also I like the detail of the creosote fence.
I didn't get the title at first but I'm presuming the dragons are fireworks, also the first couple of times I read it was in my head but then I read it out loud and then I noticed all the clever rhymes.
Sorry not much of a critique more of an appreciation, thanks for the read.
AR
I really enjoyed the imagery in this, the first stanza reminds me of all the times that I sat round camp fires and the smoke seems to follow you no matter where you sit, also I like the detail of the creosote fence.
I didn't get the title at first but I'm presuming the dragons are fireworks, also the first couple of times I read it was in my head but then I read it out loud and then I noticed all the clever rhymes.
Sorry not much of a critique more of an appreciation, thanks for the read.
AR
wae aye man ye radgie