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07-03-2013, 01:24 PM

Beautiful images. This poem makes me think of our desperate yearn to keep time frozen in our best moments, and the resigned acceptance of it's futility. This poem is above my level to critique on anything more than the feeling it gives me..........a kind of sadness which comes upon accepting something of life that I really don't want to.

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Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by billy - 03-12-2012, 10:29 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by abu nuwas - 03-12-2012, 10:57 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by billy - 03-12-2012, 11:03 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by popeye - 03-12-2012, 11:31 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Aish - 03-13-2012, 03:29 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Wildcard - 03-13-2012, 04:50 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by rayheinrich - 03-13-2012, 04:52 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Leanne - 03-13-2012, 08:05 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Aish - 03-16-2012, 01:30 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Brownlie - 06-30-2013, 09:18 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Leanne - 06-30-2013, 09:20 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by milo - 06-30-2013, 10:02 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Leanne - 06-30-2013, 10:12 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by billy - 06-30-2013, 10:18 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Leanne - 06-30-2013, 10:19 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by billy - 06-30-2013, 10:25 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by milo - 06-30-2013, 10:36 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by billy - 06-30-2013, 10:39 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Keith - 07-03-2013, 07:09 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Leanne - 07-03-2013, 07:15 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Vistaldust - 07-03-2013, 01:24 PM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by serge gurkski - 07-03-2013, 01:27 PM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by abu nuwas - 07-24-2013, 05:47 PM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Leanne - 07-25-2013, 04:39 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by StevieFinn - 07-25-2013, 05:27 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by newsclippings - 07-29-2013, 11:06 PM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by ChristopherSea - 08-15-2013, 08:30 PM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by NobodyNothing - 03-19-2014, 11:18 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Erthona - 03-19-2014, 01:27 PM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by kindofahippy - 04-12-2014, 01:09 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by Leanne - 04-16-2014, 07:16 PM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by LorettaYoung - 05-17-2014, 10:53 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by NobodyNothing - 08-29-2015, 11:27 AM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by rayheinrich - 08-29-2015, 08:53 PM

RE: Metamorphoses by Leanne: - by RiverNotch - 09-09-2015, 10:53 PM

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