07-08-2013, 12:03 PM
Hi RR,
For me, the poem was mostly cliche and feels more like 'tell' than 'show'. I needed some imaginative images to drag me in fully.
But of course, this is JMHO, to be used or discarded as you like.
Best,
LB
For me, the poem was mostly cliche and feels more like 'tell' than 'show'. I needed some imaginative images to drag me in fully.
But of course, this is JMHO, to be used or discarded as you like.
Best,
LB