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Spiky Friend
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07-24-2013, 09:37 PM
Another great image here, and the yawn is a perfect touch that says so much with just one word. As regards the title, I know different people will have different opinions as is always the case with haiku, but I don't think they should have titles and without a title yours doesn't lose anything at all. In some ways I think it could perhaps say more without a title. jmho
Very good poem. Thanks Mark  wae aye man ye radgie |
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Spiky Friend - by Volaticus - 07-24-2013, 11:26 AM
RE: Spiky Friend - by cidermaid - 07-24-2013, 03:32 PM
RE: Spiky Friend - by Volaticus - 07-25-2013, 07:29 AM
RE: Spiky Friend - by Malu - 09-10-2013, 02:27 AM
RE: Spiky Friend - by Volaticus - 09-10-2013, 02:28 AM
RE: Spiky Friend - by billy - 07-24-2013, 04:24 PM
RE: Spiky Friend - by Magpie - 07-24-2013, 09:37 PM
RE: Spiky Friend - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-25-2013, 10:21 AM
RE: Spiky Friend - by Volaticus - 07-26-2013, 01:09 AM
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