07-25-2013, 04:43 PM
no need to worry. all the ones you did are okay.
i think we could tweak any haiku all day long, it's why they're interesting
i like this edit best
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haiku 24-07-13 - by Magpie - 07-24-2013, 09:42 PM
RE: haiku 24-07-13 - by billy - 07-24-2013, 10:09 PM
RE: haiku 24-07-13 - by Magpie - 07-25-2013, 01:08 AM
RE: haiku 24-07-13 - by billy - 07-25-2013, 07:43 AM
RE: haiku 24-07-13 - by Magpie - 07-25-2013, 11:54 AM
RE: haiku 24-07-13 - by billy - 07-25-2013, 12:59 PM
RE: haiku 24-07-13 - by Magpie - 07-25-2013, 01:11 PM
RE: haiku 24-07-13 - by billy - 07-25-2013, 04:43 PM
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