12-30-2009, 05:05 PM
Maybe someone can help me give it a title?
His skin is her horizon
Like tea leaves
Like destiny;
Veins wild rivers
Mapping his hearts sea
Her spirit is foam.
Brisk, she leans in and
Tastes adventure
Thanks for feedback
His skin is her horizon
Like tea leaves
Like destiny;
Veins wild rivers
Mapping his hearts sea
Her spirit is foam.
Brisk, she leans in and
Tastes adventure
Thanks for feedback
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?