08-05-2013, 01:39 AM
(08-05-2013, 01:07 AM)rowens Wrote: It has a really boxed, stiff style.Well, these are the lyrics to the first song I've ever tried to write (just started teaching myself guitar about 2 months ago), and I wrote the tune first. Then I wrote the words while playing the song's main chord progression (C, G, Dm, Am) to fit that progression, so that might explain it.
Were you trying to do something like that?

