Fun Senryu

[billy]

some excellent snippets. i think a couple could be shortened
i'm not sure but i wonder if the senryu form should have run on lines?
that aside there's a lot of fun here.

SENRYU

Trying to be Frank

I juggle two shifts
to pay the psychiatrist Bill-- is to needed?
I´m none the wiser! is I'm needed?

Absorbed

tea leaves
she reads my fortune
then drains me out i fear you have a filthy mind

Jugs on the house

spilling my senryu--
waitress arrives to soak
up my thoughts

Cereal

breakfast tiff--
who finished the
snap,crackle & pop

Remedy

feeling itchy
I head towards the shops--
I buy 3 scratch cards

In a world of his own

census form
in the space for race
he pens 'earthling'

numbers nerd

for a second or two
something does not add up--
no one around--

easy

can´t think of one thing
that gets harder with age--
sh*t ! this is one of the best for me

Eternal Love

size matters--
kissing by the lovers tombstones
I suddenly feel stiff excellent

food for thought

tired of eating spam
I turn on the pc,
to see more damn spam! another good one, is [to see] needed?

Yummy

picking his nose
whilst waiting for the waiter
he tells me his fav food


Blind

madly in love
they overlook the danger sign--
lover´s leap

Last minute

stampede--
a rush for postcards
in the post office

Plan It

whilst stargazing
I offer her a piece of Mars--
my sweet love another really good one


Health issue

Doctor´s waiting room
I pray his up to date with his clients he's?
unlike the magazines

peer pressure

dad´s initials
engraved on the church pew--
confirmation mass

Sunny Side Up

The autopsy
reveals the cause of death--
A full English breakfast and another