Spiky Friend

Spiky Friend

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09-10-2013, 02:28 AM

(09-10-2013, 02:27 AM)Malu Wrote: I agree with this feedback, you could remove friend from the title, that way it makes the reader think more about the connection and relationship you have, nice poem!

Thanks for commenting.

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Spiky Friend - by Volaticus - 07-24-2013, 11:26 AM

RE: Spiky Friend - by cidermaid - 07-24-2013, 03:32 PM

RE: Spiky Friend - by Volaticus - 07-25-2013, 07:29 AM

RE: Spiky Friend - by Malu - 09-10-2013, 02:27 AM

RE: Spiky Friend - by Volaticus - 09-10-2013, 02:28 AM

RE: Spiky Friend - by billy - 07-24-2013, 04:24 PM

RE: Spiky Friend - by Magpie - 07-24-2013, 09:37 PM

RE: Spiky Friend - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-25-2013, 10:21 AM

RE: Spiky Friend - by Volaticus - 07-26-2013, 01:09 AM

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