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Black Sand Beach
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09-11-2013, 01:27 AM
As someone who grew up in a partly urban environment, I got a very vivid sense of the surroundings I realized as I matured. Stanza 3 does kind of throw me off the visualization a bit, but I'm sure those words have much more meaning to you than to some readers, perhaps elaborate on that idea or phrase it different?
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Black Sand Beach - by Bunx - 09-09-2013, 08:17 AM
RE: Stumble - by Volaticus - 09-09-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: Stumble - by blueforest10 - 09-11-2013, 12:57 AM
RE: Stumble - by lineman10 - 09-11-2013, 01:27 AM
RE: Stumble - by Markworth - 05-03-2014, 12:15 PM
RE: Stumble - by Bunx - 05-03-2014, 11:34 PM
RE: Stumble - by poe - 05-07-2014, 12:48 AM
RE: Stumble - by Orion - 10-07-2014, 01:19 AM
RE: Stumble - by LorettaYoung - 05-07-2014, 09:45 AM
RE: Stumble - by Bunx - 05-07-2014, 01:35 PM
RE: Stumble - by benno_422 - 05-07-2014, 09:51 PM
RE: Stumble - by bbcashdollar - 05-08-2014, 01:39 AM
RE: Stumble - by Quotidia - 10-05-2014, 04:20 PM
RE: Stumble - by b.abraham - 10-07-2014, 07:16 AM
RE: Stumble - by gypsyrose - 10-13-2014, 05:10 AM
RE: Stumble - by Dymun Fengshui - 12-15-2014, 04:23 AM
RE: Stumble - by Bunx - 12-15-2014, 04:47 AM
RE: Stumble - by BW BRINE - 12-16-2014, 02:05 PM
RE: Stumble - by tectak - 12-16-2014, 08:23 PM
RE: Stumble - by Bunx - 12-17-2014, 12:46 AM
RE: Stumble - by tectak - 12-17-2014, 05:25 PM
RE: Stumble - by Kutomba - 12-21-2014, 04:04 AM
RE: Stumble - by B888IE - 12-21-2014, 07:59 AM
RE: Stumble - by Bunx - 12-21-2014, 11:24 AM
RE: Stumble - by amiwrite - 12-28-2014, 12:54 PM
RE: Stumble - by somnium - 01-02-2015, 01:11 PM
RE: Stumble - by Bunx - 01-03-2015, 12:19 AM
RE: Black Sand Beach - by Bunx - 07-09-2024, 11:25 PM
RE: Black Sand Beach - by BurningSh#t - 07-14-2024, 04:14 AM
RE: Black Sand Beach - by crow - 07-16-2024, 08:40 PM
RE: Black Sand Beach - by Bunx - 08-16-2024, 11:55 PM
RE: Black Sand Beach - by carahmellow - 10-08-2024, 12:11 PM
RE: Black Sand Beach - by Bunx - 10-09-2024, 12:06 AM
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