09-11-2013, 08:28 AM
(09-11-2013, 08:13 AM)trueenigma Wrote:Aw shucks...since you ask so nicely, maybe(09-11-2013, 08:07 AM)tectak Wrote:(09-11-2013, 07:28 AM)trueenigma Wrote: I wonder if you might consider a rewrite? Despite its awkwardness there is something about it that is attractive. Nice try.So you liked it then?
Also, I don't understand the title. Which is the American God? Sounds to me like the european one. For me the american god could be one of two things both something else entirely. The Great Spirit, or Money.
Or..ahem.. I mean..theh Ahlmighteh Dowleh
The guy that this is about had no doubt about which God he felt saved him! The americanisms are currants in an english bun and would probably be cut in a movie (John Wayne " Truly, this man is the son of gawd" wasn't. Pity)
Enjoy it for what it is...and if you can't, enjoy it for what it isn't...I shall take you advice and consider a rewrite. Done. No.
Best and thanks,
always,
TectakWhat the Hell are you saying here? I get the no rewrites but you lost me with the rest. And John Wayne is no longer with us.
Shit, now I'm John Wayne!