Does Passion Burn?

[ZachSmith]

There are typos in here. Many of the lines sound muddled, like a lazy translation from another language. But do you have anything to say about that? Is it well thought out, or is it unintentional?

Unintentional, really. I don't to much follow any style of poetry. I just write what I feel and how I feel it. I guess I have my own style.