Does Passion Burn?

[milo]

There are typos in here. Many of the lines sound muddled, like a lazy translation from another language. But do you have anything to say about that? Is it well thought out, or is it unintentional?

Unintentional, really. I don't to much follow any style of poetry. I just write what I feel and how I feel it. I guess I have my own style.

your own style seems exactly like the "own" style of millions of others clueless "poets" that never bother to actually learn about poetry or put any time or work into it.

Weird.