09-15-2013, 01:47 AM 
	
	
	
		This is a little better than your last poem. But is it going to stay exactly like it is? People always want you to talk about other poems on this site, and I guess when it comes down to reason, it's better to know what you're all about and what you have to say in other areas of poetry and ideas, so somebody'll know how to talk to you, and you'll know who you're talking to and why.
	
	
	
	

