Senryu (September 12, 2013)

[Malu]

yeah here in the philippines it centigrade and in the uk it's the other one.

nice little poem.

i wonder if the cut would have been strong with "where's the doctor" or something to seperate both clauses a bit more.
sorry for getting here late

Thanks billy, I really like your suggestion for the last line, I think it works a lot better than what I have now. Mind if I use it?

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exceeding
fourtyone
call the doctor

Haha this is a funny poem, nice to see some humor, don't worry you're not even at the half time!

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it. It's nice to see some different interpretations (the poem is about having a fever, not about age ).

Oh haha ok I can see that too, but I didn't at first since I'm from America and we still use the standard system haha