realization

[Malu]

tattered and lost
nostalgia grabs
stumble, dropped,

blinking

fast falling reflections
despair drifts from the sky

mortified

rippling beauty of the surface
tumultuous smokey reflection,

deliverance

hung, waiting, splashing
verve and vigor
beauty falls from within

dark, grey, unmoved
apathetic

realization

reflections bare
it's the vessel

The listing of descriptions mixed with more vivid explanations is ok, but I would like to be shown and visualize what you are saying rather than be told with the listing of several things. Just my critique, hope this helps!