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The Listener
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09-23-2013, 02:15 PM
Usually people rally against clichès, but somehow they seemed appropriate here. I liked it. Smile Only thing I really noticed was, as Billy pointed out, the dam/damn thing. Thanks for sharing!
"Certain things they should stay the way they are. You ought to be able to stick them in one of those big glass cases and just leave them be." ~Holden Caulfield
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The Listener - by Malu - 09-23-2013, 12:11 PM
RE: The Listener - by billy - 09-23-2013, 01:00 PM
RE: The Listener - by Malu - 09-23-2013, 01:06 PM
RE: The Listener - by Erthona - 09-23-2013, 01:42 PM
RE: The Listener - by Malu - 09-24-2013, 01:21 AM
RE: The Listener - by Jim Steele - 09-24-2013, 03:24 AM
RE: The Listener - by Malu - 09-24-2013, 03:27 AM
RE: The Listener - by Jim Steele - 09-23-2013, 02:15 PM



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