The Listener
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(09-23-2013, 01:42 PM)Erthona Wrote:  Seems kind of wordy. Smile


Dale
Thanks for the feedback Smile

(09-23-2013, 02:15 PM)Jim Steele Wrote:  Usually people rally against clichès, but somehow they seemed appropriate here. I liked it. Smile Only thing I really noticed was, as Bully pointed out, the dam/damn thing. Thanks for sharing!
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it Smile
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Messages In This Thread
The Listener - by Malu - 09-23-2013, 12:11 PM
RE: The Listener - by billy - 09-23-2013, 01:00 PM
RE: The Listener - by Malu - 09-23-2013, 01:06 PM
RE: The Listener - by Erthona - 09-23-2013, 01:42 PM
RE: The Listener - by Malu - 09-24-2013, 01:21 AM
RE: The Listener - by Jim Steele - 09-24-2013, 03:24 AM
RE: The Listener - by Malu - 09-24-2013, 03:27 AM
RE: The Listener - by Jim Steele - 09-23-2013, 02:15 PM



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