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	(09-23-2013, 01:42 PM)Erthona Wrote: Seems kind of wordy.Thanks for the feedback
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(09-23-2013, 02:15 PM)Jim Steele Wrote: Usually people rally against clichès, but somehow they seemed appropriate here. I liked it.Thanks! I'm glad you liked itOnly thing I really noticed was, as Bully pointed out, the dam/damn thing. Thanks for sharing!
 
	
 

 
