09-24-2013, 03:29 AM
I got a bit lost in the abstract wording, but I'm not that difficult to confuse. I do have one question, though - the structure of the poem - I liked the rhythm, with occasional words isolated for emphasis, but was there any particular reason why the stanzas varied between three short lines and two longer ones, or did it just work out that way when you wrote it?
Thanks for sharing
Thanks for sharing
"Certain things they should stay the way they are. You ought to be able to stick them in one of those big glass cases and just leave them be." ~Holden Caulfield

