One Night (edit #2)

[ellajam]

You can do whatever you want, it's your poem but you should have a reason for your choice. I am curious how you think eliminating punctuation helps this poem.

Well, I can't say I know how it helps this specific poem, so I'm trying it. I think the only way to figure out where I stand on this is to start paying attention to it while reading and really observe its effects. I may be too close to my own poems to tell whether it adds or detracts.

Thanks for the lead.