realization

realization

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09-28-2013, 02:24 AM

I can appreciate what you tried to do with this, but I feel the execution is off. You have to let the reader feel the poem, and I think the structure of this detracts from that. This is like the skeleton of the poem you're trying to write, now it needs the rest.

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realization - by blah - 08-13-2013, 10:38 PM

RE: realization - by Malu - 09-22-2013, 03:28 AM

RE: realization - by cidermaid - 09-24-2013, 02:30 AM

RE: realization - by Highever - 09-28-2013, 06:14 PM

RE: realization - by Jim Steele - 09-24-2013, 03:29 AM

RE: realization - by SimikPK - 09-26-2013, 04:39 AM

RE: realization - by metalfan91 - 09-28-2013, 02:24 AM

RE: realization - by tectak - 10-05-2013, 07:14 AM

RE: realization - by Dreamer - 09-28-2013, 03:49 AM

RE: realization - by tigrflye - 09-28-2013, 02:41 PM

RE: realization - by bena - 10-03-2013, 08:41 AM

RE: realization - by Mogra - 10-08-2013, 02:04 AM

RE: realization - by Nafy - 10-09-2013, 05:13 PM

RE: realization - by Erthona - 10-09-2013, 05:29 PM

RE: realization - by Xavier Horovitz - 10-10-2013, 01:18 PM

RE: realization - by RyanRader13 - 10-11-2013, 03:38 AM

RE: realization - by nhanna1223 - 02-03-2014, 01:59 AM

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